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'Give up' You've lost her

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She greets you each day with a smile so sweet,
and a cute little wave that makes your heart skip a beat.
Why does she act so nice? Why does she treat you so kind?
You keep on searching though there's no answer to find.
Why does she act so kind? Why does she treat you so nice?
You think you know, but heed my advice.

Give up, you've lost her. The love you see is in your mind.
Give up, you've lost her. you'd better leave those empty hopes behind.

You sit and discuss all your common views.
She understands the crazy things that you do.
You start to believe your meeting her was fate,
then she asks your advice on her upcoming date.

Give up, you've lost her! she only wants to be your friend!
Give up, you've lost her! or this unhappiness will never end!

You decide to stop hiding all you feel inside.
It's time to stand up and swallow your pride.
But Just When You're About To Tell Her Everything,
that's when she shows you HER ENGAGEMENT RING!

GIVE UP, YOU'VE LOST HER! SHE'S GOT A RING AROUND HER FINGER NOW!
GIVE UP, YOU'VE LOST HER! SHE'S GONNA GIVE SOMEBODY ELSE HER VOW!
GIVE UP, YOU'VE LOST HER! ALL YOUR DREAMS HAVE LAID DOWN AND DIED!
GIVE UP YOU'VE LOST HER! .. . .. she's gonna be somebody else's bride.
I wrote the ending to this when I was about 18 and it's been more or less haunting me ever since. It feels pretty good to have the lyrics hammered out. Now I just need to figure out how to put it to music.
© 2008 - 2024 FlameLordSpence
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JeffMillennium's avatar
Man... I know where you're coming from, I think most of us have been there. But you sir you put life into words (a skill worth having) and quite adeptly might I add.

So my friend, I applaud you. I liked it a lot.