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I tell myself they won't see what you feel
just because you treat them nice
I say don't surrender your heart 'till you know it's for real
but I never listen to my own advise
I just dive head long
once more into heartache
once more into misery
once more into thinking
this will be the end of me
I shouldn't bet all my joy on a single dream
it hurts too much to lose it all
I've been left broken with no self esteem
more times than I care to recall
but I still run
once more into sorrow
once more into anxiety
once more into concealing
there's a weaker side of me
though I feel the pain from all the times I've failed
I still try ro look like a rock
though deep down I know that my ship has sailed
I still keep standing at the dock
then I step off
once more into anguish
once more into agony
once more into wishing
all the world would leave me be
just because you treat them nice
I say don't surrender your heart 'till you know it's for real
but I never listen to my own advise
I just dive head long
once more into heartache
once more into misery
once more into thinking
this will be the end of me
I shouldn't bet all my joy on a single dream
it hurts too much to lose it all
I've been left broken with no self esteem
more times than I care to recall
but I still run
once more into sorrow
once more into anxiety
once more into concealing
there's a weaker side of me
though I feel the pain from all the times I've failed
I still try ro look like a rock
though deep down I know that my ship has sailed
I still keep standing at the dock
then I step off
once more into anguish
once more into agony
once more into wishing
all the world would leave me be
I actually started on this one before "write of what you know" then found my brain got stuck. It'd been sitting half done on a note pad page for nearly a month.
It seems to be walking the line between seriously deep and just plain corny and I think it's losing it's balance.
It seems to be walking the line between seriously deep and just plain corny and I think it's losing it's balance.
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